Comical Strip- Rough

Our Visual Story assignments so far have been culminating to this: the Comical Strip. Having studied the visual language (ie, shots, pans, perspective, visual space, etc), we are to create a 4 panel strip using characters of our own design to craft a joke of sorts. I opted to use the ones I created for the class. Here's the rough draft (the final draft is due next week... he'll be critiquing these today):